17 thoughts on “autumn’s arrival 

  1. Tournesol

    J’adore! I love when my eyes can read with all my senses. Beautifully written, Milan

    drying stream
    silent verdure stand still
    autumn’s arrival

    lethargic shrouds form
    season’s new duvet

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    1. milan rajkumar Post author

      Merci bien ! the tan renga is more sublime !
      I am using the drying stream as departure of summer and the coming of winter . It has a sad quality but your lines suddenly make it so warm !

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  2. Pingback: awaiting autumn – tan renga – Tournesol dans un jardin

    1. milan rajkumar Post author

      Thank you Kristjaan , my idea is about the parting between summer and autumn i.e. departure of summer . But Cheryl’s top up renga make it a warm and joyous welcome of autumn ! she is always great .

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