Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #10 Teika’s 4th Tanka Writing Technique – convicting feeling (abandoned beach)

jhulon
photo (my pic)

ladies elegant choral
monsoon’s jhulan night
she was once there ;
i look at my blank-eyed  woman
showing her shabby hand cymbals .

(c)milan rajkumar

for,
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/11/carpe-diem-tanka-splendor-10-teikas-4th.html

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