a stupa

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 22nd: “on a windless day” by Cheryl Lynn (a.k.a. Tournesol)

on a windless day
six circles take shape
a pebble skips                              (Tournesol)

sweet memories rise up
smiles and tears in battle              (Chèvrefeuille)

I always admire Cheryl’s works ! She is an admirable poetess . having known each other for a long time , I could imagine her thoughts when I see this haiku / hokku .
now , here is my attempt to heighten Cheryl’s hokku :

on a windless day
six circles take shape
a pebble skips                              (Tournesol)

a few balancing stones
admire the skipping one
(milan)

image

photo ( my pic )

for,
chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_22.html

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