parting

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 17th: “spring rain” by Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926)

spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella                         

(Ozaki Hosai)

raindrops resonate
puddle filled clouds                               

(Chèvrefeuille)

here is my attempt for the same :

spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella                         

(Ozaki Hosai)

they choose their ways
salty water on the sand

( milan rajkumar )

for,
chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_16.html

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