Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 17th: “spring rain” by Ozaki Hosai (1885-1926)
spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella
(Ozaki Hosai)
raindrops resonate
puddle filled clouds
(Chèvrefeuille)
here is my attempt for the same :
spring rain:
parting on the beach
a boat and an umbrella
(Ozaki Hosai)
they choose their ways
salty water on the sand
( milan rajkumar )
for,
chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_16.html
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Nice continuation Milan
thanks !