fallen willow leaves

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 10th “the willow leaves fallen” by Yosa Buson

the willow leaves fallen,
the spring gone dry,
rocks here and there                                  
© Buson

the full moon embraces the willow
that reflects in the city pond                      

© Chèvrefeuille

here is my attempt to heighten Buson’ s haiku with a Tan Remga 

the willow leaves fallen,
the spring gone dry,
rocks here and there                                  
© Buson

altogether , a reminder
teardrops upon the cheek of time

© milan rajkumar

chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_9.html

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