autumn leaves

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 9th “autumn leaves turn red” by Georgia (a.k.a. Bastet)

Georgia , a k a Bastet is a wonderful poetess ; her works are always original and always clasiical , never missing a kigo or a kiregi ! I still remember how she promoted SANGAI – an endangered deer with brows in its antler . ….

now , here is my attempt to heighten the haiku of Georgia with my tan renga …

a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red

© Georgia

the careless wind sweeps away
youth’s dream along with the leaves

© milan rajkumar

for,
chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/2016/05/carpe-diem-tan-renga-challenge-month_8.html

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