swings

swings

the wild olives
swing in the stormy night
hanging for life

image

photo ( my pic)

for,
https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2016/05/01/haiku-horizons-prompt-swing/

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13 thoughts on “swings

  1. Bekkie Sanchez

    I love it! Once I made olives from scratch it’s a long process!

    I hope you don’t mind, in your line “swings in the stormy night” you used the wrong tense of swing. It should read “swing in the stormy night.”

    Reply
      1. Bekkie Sanchez

        So glad you took it well. Sometimes people get strange about pointing out these things. I’m always glad when somehow does it for me, I have made spelling mistakes, not using the right tense, etc. Writing poetry in what person…and then what you pointed out, the correction software! Lol! Have a good weekend!

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