riddle

her sloppy kisses
wake me up from the cat nap –
my flea ridden bitch .

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Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #13 Riddle

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5 thoughts on “riddle

  1. kim881

    Nice idea but your original haiku is slightly spoilt by the incorrect grammar that jars in the second line – should be ‘her sloppy kisses wake me up …’

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