heaven’s gateway

how rare the sight—
yellow blossoms brushing
the sky with light
                                     (MMT)
underneath the Laburnum
I always will love her
                             (Chèvrefeuille)

my attempt :

how rare the sight—
yellow blossoms brushing
the sky with light
                                      (MMT)
mesmerized eyelids’ kisses
a glimpse of heaven’s gateway             (milan rajkumar)

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yellow 3

for,

CARPE DIEM TAN RENGA CHALLENGE #47, MMT’S “HOW RARE THE SIGHT”

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13 thoughts on “heaven’s gateway

  1. sarala D

    Very lovely lines indee, raj.Laburnum otherwise golden shower is the regional flower of Kerala.It is the holy flower for the first sight of ‘Vishu’.So we love it.

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